In response to PJ’s photo prompted Flash Fiction challenge (75 – 175 words). Special thanks to Dawn M. Miller for the photo.
Beaten, battered, scrambled, torn. My life is worn by a stranger with my face. A stranger who accepts peace in installments. Dammit, he’s home again.
~*~
Emboldened by fallacies, my beloved strikes me from night to morn. Wait it out. Wait for the front door to slam, for the picture frames to cease their shaking, before I sneak away.
~*~
Hank tosses over a racket; I catch it by hand. He teaches me to be strong, teaches me to stand. The tennis court contradicts my life in the sand. Reshaping, I somehow rise in the ranks.
~*~
Taste of life, taste of power. I’m weary of the war, the box, his seed. The sores for all to see and feed. Launch and smack the ball; grow weak, for a reason. Oh, if you only knew how the ball sails far beyond where my worries sink.
~*~
Empowered and enraged, I slam the front door. For once, this floor becomes my stage. I throw my bag down, grip my racket, and refuse my sweet beloved’s cage. And in court, I make sure to give Hank my thanks.
(186 words, eek! 😳)
I like how you say tennis sails past her worries. I’m glad she has an outlet for her rage and what is happening in her personal life.
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Thanks! I’m glad she found tennis, too.
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Wow! A wonderful story and all in 14 sentences. (I might have to recount that but that’s what I counted). Awesome! Thank you for participating and I really hope you will continue. 🙂
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20 lol. Thanks! Flash fiction is new to me, but I’m loving it
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This was lovely. It was incredibly moving. I hope it’s fiction! Glad it ended well for her. I love the use of short sentences, I sometimes think that I over use them all the time.
xo
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Thanks for reading and expressing your reaction! I understand your dilemma (about short sentences). I have to remind myself that as with all things, too much of a “good” thing may become a “bad” thing. Then again, there are exceptions to that rule. It all depends on what you’re writing, and if short sentences are your style, then they’re your style ^_^
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That was awesome.
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Thanks! 😀
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This is a great piece of writing, izzy. It’s so nicely laid out on the page and reads almost like a poem.
Ellespeth
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Thank you so much. And I agree; it does read almost like a poem. I couldn’t help myself. ^_^ If that’s where the river’s flowing, that’s where the river’s flowing. Hopefully that makes sense!
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This is an excellent piece of writing, I enjoyed very much!
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I’m glad you did. Thanks for stopping by and showing your support!
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Awesome write…you wrote it out like a ballad…great job!!! And it was very realistic…good for her…awesome ending!!
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Thanks! I’m so glad I found this challenge
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This is very poetic. I liked how you got a feeling for what the MC is feeling. And how she uses something she enjoys to find strength. I really hope she leaves her current love for Hank!
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Oh, the ending is open to interpretation (filing for divorce or killing her beloved), but either way, she definitely cut herself off from that guy.
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This is excellent Izzy. I love how you used the tennis/court as a metaphor for life and dealing with its challenges. Well done.
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Coming from you, this means a lot. Thanks!
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This was excellently written. It read almost like a poem of life. Glad she found tennis and empowerment on and in the court(s).
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Exactly! Thank you for sharing such eloquent thoughts. I’m very happy you enjoyed it, too
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