Much thanks to the beautiful Priceless Joy for hosting Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers (75 – 175 words) and Iain Kelly for providing the inspiring photo prompt this week. If you haven’t heard of or joined this challenge, please check out PJ’s blog for more details and entertaining entries. You won’t regret it.
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Now, to the story:
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“I don’t feel so good.”
“That’s just nerves, bud. You’ll do great, and I’ll be right here waiting.” James shares a secret handshake with his son and then watches Sam take the stage.
Late practices, blisters, calluses. All worth it for this moment. This audition. Or so Sam has been saying, every second, of every day.
Now there he is, holding his shoulders back. Violin high. Arms strong.
The first note washes over the crowd. Then Sam wets himself. And passes out.
Eyes wide, face red, James runs across the stage for his son.
Later, there are no words. Only fries and burgers. That’s the best remedy James can come up with. His wife would’ve known what to do.
Eating outside, Sam picks at his food. His burger collapses into his fries. “Shave my hair, change my name. That’s my only option… Or I can seppuku myself.”
James laughs, then regrets it. Simultaneously, a helicopter soars overhead, blades beating the air. But Sam still must’ve heard his dad since he’s glaring at him.
“Sorry.” Kids really should come with manuals.
Nice story. I was waiting for the helicopter to appear! Great father/son bond.
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Those are important, huh? And yeah, lol. As I was free writing from the prompt, I also wondered when the helicopter was going to appear 😛
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Kids should really come with manuals. ~> This sentence cracked me up. Great writing!
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Lol. Same for me, so I’m glad you laughed, too. Thanks for reading and letting me know!
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Hahaha, I love this Izzy!!!! I’d probably be thing along the same lines as him – new hair, new look, maybe even new name 😂
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And new country!! Lol. If only he was able to wipe out everyone’s memory, right? Hopefully nobody posted videos on YouTube *cringing.* My poor character. Thanks for reading, Ameena!
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Funny! But I really feel bad for him. It will certainly be a time in his life that will.never be forgotten . No, unfortunately there are no manuals that come with kids…..you won’t find everything on the internet either….no matter how long you search. 🙂 Enjoyed.
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Is that a confession about searching for manuals? Lol. I don’t have any kids, but I have nephews and a niece. I love them so much and wish I could shield them from many times, but I can’t. All we can do is keep moving forward, right? ^_^ Thanks for reading, laughing, and cringing.
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This is a very unique take, Izzy! A unique and adorable one! ❤
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Aw, thanks. I think adorable in a “let me hold you and protect you” kind of way, too. Thanks for reading and commenting!
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i would agree! 😀 You’re welcome!
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This was really cute! 🙂 Great take!
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The puking part? Just kidding. Thanks, Saima!
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Oh no, I feel so bad for Sam! What a traumatic experience. James really should be more supportive. Anyway. You told that story very well! And what an interesting take on the prompt, good job. 🙂
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Lol, James is trying. But yes, very humiliating for Sam. I don’t know what I would do if that happened to me or someone I knew. *shaking my head in horror*
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Aw poor guy. The fast food was a good idea. It seems like a big horrible thing but the little guy will move on, as life does. Great take Izzy.
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Will he, Mandi, will he? (lol) No, you’re right. He’ll move on eventually. Take it day by day. But! He’ll have to equip himself with some positive self-regard to make it through — especially if he does go back to that school.
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No one has commented on the fact that no mother is present. For something as momentous as this moment, it can only mean (in my mind) that she has died. Which might also explain the wetting himself. But believe me, adding to what mandibelle 16 says, the little guy might move on, but he will never forget. I loved the story. It will certainly stay with me for awhile.
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Thanks, Emilio. And you’re right, his mother passed away. In my head, that did play into Sam wetting himself on stage, but I didn’t write it out into the story. So wow, thank you for picking up on that and considering it.
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Great last line …. specially in a world world sans grand parents.
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Thanks! I’m glad you liked the last line, too. But what did you mean by “world sans grand parents”?
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A world of nuclear families. 🙂
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Hold tight. I’m writing the manual now 😛
Great take!
Ellespeth
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HA! Your comment made me burst out laughing. Thank you so much for that.
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Oh this is a brilliant story.
I can feel the son’s embarrassment.
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Ooh, I really appreciate you saying that. What if that happened to us? Or our kids (and by “our” kids, I mean any that we love and cherish)? Chaos. Thanks again for reading and sharing your thoughts!
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Awesome story – at once poignant, heartbreaking (i also took his wetting himself to mean the loss of his mother) and funny. No mean task that!
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