It’s my pleasure to thank Priceless Joy for this photo prompted Flash Fiction challenge (75 – 175 words). I’d also like to thank pixabay.com for this ominous shot.
Alice’s POV
“Missed me already?” Hansel’s acidic words drip down from the cage suspended above.
These swines have him locked below their castle. Not in the dungeons. Under them. For good measure, but I still despise them for it.
I shiver and wrap my dusty cloak tighter around myself.
Our nation’s darling princess tilts her diamond-clad head and squeezes my shoulder. “Are you certain you want to do this?”
I nod. Contempt straddles my tongue. I can’t risk revealing it with the tremble of my voice.
She draws back between her guards.
I lick my chapped lips. “How could I not miss you, Hansel?”
He bangs his body against the bars. Wide-eyed, he darts his gaze from me to the princess and her pigs.
Yet, in a split second, he becomes stone-faced. “You . . . shouldn’t have come.”
I clench my hands, willing my heartbeat to steady. “You should’ve kept your promise.” (To save yourself. Stay safe.)
His dark eyes gleam as his magic faintly prickles my senses. Somehow, it’s contained in that cage. Still, the guards behind me shift and tense their shoulders.
I lift my chin higher. “This is merely temporary. We shouldn’t worry about each other . . . ?”
Hansel grins, baring sharp teeth. It fades, and he inches back, out of view. “Don’t come here again.”
(213 words, darn it! -_-)
Nice one, Izzie!
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Thanks! Look out for my entry into Pic ‘n’ Post tomorrow 😀
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Oh, very intriguing. I do want to know what’s going to happen!
I love the title, by the way 🙂
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I was excited when the title finally came to mind. Thanks for noting your love for it. I decided to continue this story, but first I need to step back before I move forward (you’ll see what I mean in my next post) ^_^
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Excellent! I see a continuation on this one… I hope. 😀 😀
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Thanks! I mulled it over and decided to continue this story.
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Wonderful! I look forward to reading it. 😀
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I was going through a tough time recently (such is life sometimes), but writing in any form helps. So a huge thanks to you for these writing/photo prompts.
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You’re welcome! I am so glad that you are enjoying them and that they are helping you through your tough times. 🙂
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Nice twist!
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Thanks
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Very nice.
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Thanks!
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Nice job, Izzy, very creepy
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Thanks
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This is a creative take on the prompt with vivid images That I could envision the characters as I was reading the words. Job well done! 🙂
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Thank you for much for expressing support and what drew you into the story. That helps a lot 😀 😀
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A nice touch of fantasy, imaginatively written, Izzy. A very appropriate title, too. 🙂
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Oh how I appreciate you and your comments 😀 Thanks!
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Thanks Izzy! I appreciate that you write well. 🙂
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Very creative and well written. Great descriptions of the characters.
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As I mentioned to another blogger, I love it when specific things are pointed out. So thanks for that!! ❤
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Very intense. And very gritty. I bet you could cut it down if you wanted to make the word count and it’d work well with this story, a few short cutting sentences.
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*tear tear* I struggle with cutting things down. 😦 That’s another major reason why I love these flash fiction challenges. 🙂
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Very good…in a creepy sort of way. Maybe she should heed his advice.
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Ooh, maybe she should, but we’ll find out soon if she actually listens. Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts!
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Hi Izzy! I just wanted to stop by and thank you for participating in these challenges. I sure hope you will continue! I love reading your stories. 🙂
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Aw, thank you. You didn’t have to say/write this, but the fact that you took the time to do so means a lot. I truly appreciate that. ❤
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It is my pleasure! I am happy you have become a part of the Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers! 🙂
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🐱 ❤ I need to catch on last week's entries!
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What a cute kitty!!
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((Hugs!!) xoxo
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